So bad it's funny! Seriously! snorting your coffee through your nose funny, but it's not what the author intended, I hope. Not particularly hot erotically speaking.
The heroine will give you whiplash with her moods. In one sentence she has rage boiling through her at the presumtuous remarks of one of the many heroes but will be relaxing by the end of it.
I makes me think a 14 year old girl whose only experience with sex is from reading letters to the editor in a porn mag might have writtten this(ick! I know).
If you want a laugh go for it!! :-))